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雅思作文范文-一个7分考生的分享

2013-12-13

雅思写作7分,算是可以作为范文了。今天,小编特地找来一篇,来给大家分享分享,希望能对大家有所帮助!

在雅思考试中写作在总成绩中占有较高的地位,也正因为如此,很多考生将雅思作文作为备考的要点。对于一些考生而言想要在雅思作文中取得好的成绩是一件不可能完成的事情,但是事实并不是这样的,只要您掌握了雅思作文的写作手法,雅思作文高分成绩就是您的了。下面就是一篇雅思作文范文,感兴趣的话,大家不妨试着了解一下。

雅思写作7分范文——Topic

Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn\'t. Which do you think is good practice.

雅思写作7分范文——TEXT(257 Words)

One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.

Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.

Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.

Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their adult children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other.

这是一篇在文章形式内容以及结构上安排的都算是比较合理,在雅思考试中能够写出这样一篇文章确实是不多见的,大家确实也有借鉴的必要。还有,一些考生可能在意识上存在误区,总是习惯性的套用范文,其实这样并不是可取的。虽说范文写的棒,但是并不代表大家在考试的时候也要去临摹范文,大家完全可以根据平日里的积累,以及自身掌握的一些写作方法去创作,这样才能够真正提高自己的写作能力。

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