雅思写作如何从模仿到高分？

每个考生在备考雅思写作时都会接触范文，范文往往也是考生们常模仿的对象，武汉小马过河国际教育的老师表示，在备考的初期，我们模仿范文，在备考的后期，我们要做到超越范文，那么如何完成这一转变呢？

相信资深烤鸭对于范文的了解已经鞭辟入里了，但是看着那么“简单”的范文(词汇和语法都不难)，为什么自己却很难达到考官的level，下面吉林新东方的思佳老师gives you certain hints as follows：

Part 1 那些细致入微的精辟表达：

考官范文片段重现：

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(1) The obvious argument in its favor is that young children pick up languages much more easily than teenagers.

(2) The greater flexibility of primary timetable allows a more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centered approach.

(3) Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure.

(4) They may also gain a better understanding of other cultures.

(5) Anything which encourages language learning benefits society culturally and economically, and early exposure to language learning contributes to this.

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(1) A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.

(2) Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either out work or our leisure time.

(3) If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening.

(4) As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of thesecontributes to poor health.

诸如此类的表达比比皆是，无非就是“修饰修饰再修饰”，很简单的原理“adj修饰n”“adv修饰v”。想达到考官的水平，现在跟老师一起练起来吧：

例1: “发展中国家”

Step1: a developing country

Step2: a country in development

Step 3: a certain country in its present development

See the effects? Another example now: “免费教育”

Step1: free education

Step2: education without any charge

Step3: particular education without any personal charge

Now what about“提高生活质量”

Step1: to enhance the quality of life

Step 2: the enhancement of living quality

Step 3: the great enhancement of individuals’ living quality

Now it’s your turn:

练习1: 满足人们的需求

Step1:

Step2:

Step3:

练习2: 改善健康水平

Step1:

Step2:

Step3:

练习3: 减少支出

Step1:

Step2:

Step3:

Possible version here:

练习1: great satisfaction of various requirements from the public

练习2: huge enhancement of public health level

练习3: a large-degree reduction of personal cost in education

This time, make your paragraph like this:

Free education makes room for a large-degree reduction of personal cost in education and makes individuals much more knowledgeable in various aspects, which will bring them with abilities to create wealth or fortune independently.

以上就是雅思写作从模仿到高分的转变方法，武汉小马过河国际教育的老师表示，大家在学习范文时，要注重领会其流畅的表达方式，而不要仅仅照搬内容。